Topic: George Rogers

[iKod]

Character name: George Rogers

Age and Gender: Male, 11

Description: Has A Grey Shirt, Jeans, And is a Brunette.
He is Referred by some of his Family The Pokemon Expert.
History: He claims that his life is luxurios, as his parents owna Spa Run by Some of their own pokemon, Sometimes a Spoiled Brat, he doesnt act like if he were rich, however.
Some people are surprised by the amount of shinies that he has, however, he didnt get them all himself, as he trades with many persons, he has 4 shines.


Friends and enemies:

Friends: None
Enemies: None

Pokémon:
Alakazam
Moves:
Thunderpunch
Psychic
Fire Punch
Ice Punch
Pelliper (Shiny)
Moves:
Fly
Toxic
Ice Beam
Hidden Power (Dark)
Electrode (Shiny)
Moves:
Explosion
Thunderbolt
Substitute
Hidden Power (Grass)
Dusclops (Shiny)
Moves:
Shadow Punch
Ice Punch
Fire Punch
Toxic
Tentacruel (Shiny)
Moves:
Surf
Sludge Bomb
Barrier
Giga Drain
Sceptile
Moves:
Aerial Ace
Thunderpunch
Leaf Blade
Dragon Claw

Pokemon in box:
Pichu, Abra, Voltorb, Wingull, Treeckox3, Tentacool, Duskull

[Joeno]

Please run a spell check and check your capitalization. Also, please expand your history section - why are you travelling, where did you get your Pokemon and so on - and perhaps try to add some more things to your description.

Also, it would help if you could add moves to your Pokemon and change the subject of the topic to the name of your character for easy searching.

[iKod]

Done, Done, and Done.

Is it OK now?