Name: Andrew Kane
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Description: Standing at 6' 4" Andrew has brown hair and hazel eyes. Andrew has a little bit of fat but this is not caused by excess of food but by lack of exercise. He basically lives in jeans and you wont find him wearing much else on his legs. He prefers trainers for shoewear and loves his purple and black hoodie.
Personality: Andrew is a generally optimistic person who has loved Pokémon since the age of five. He gets angry very easily but does not respond with violence but with shouting and heavy breathing. He loves water Pokémon and he adores Rotom.
History: Andrew has travelled most of the world and collected thirty six badges on his journey. He competed in five championships but lost all five. After his failure as a trainer he decided to turn to co-ordinating but hasn't won a single ribbon yet and is hoping to start his journey soon.
Friends: None... Yet
Enemies: None... Yet
Pokémon:
(http://www.pokemondb.co.uk/images/sprites/diamond-pearl/normal/feraligatr.png)
Feraligatr - Splash LV78
Whirlpool, Ice Beam, Focus Punch, Aqua Tail
Splash was Andrew's first ever Pokémon and the only one he had for most of his journey in Johto until he realised he would do better with more than one Pokémon.
(http://www.freewebs.com/umbreon97/Glameow%20ani.gif)
Glameow - Pearl LV63
Water Pulse, Thunderbolt, Double Team, Shadow Ball
When Andrew decided to restart his journey he chose three Pokémon to come with him and Pearl got in due to her gorgeous coat and her wide range of attacks.
(http://pkmn.net/sprites/platinum/default/196.png)
Espeon - KC LV82
Morning Sun, Rain Dance, Signal Beam, Swift
Andrew caught an Eevee in the Johto region and she soon became Andrew's best friend. She then evolved into an Espeon and bonded with Andrew even more.
Dare I suggest, use of, commas? Makes things so much easier to read. Other than that, approved.
Quote from: Typhlosion on April 24, 2009, 23:58
Dare I suggest, use of, commas? Makes things so much easier to read. Other than that, approved.
Yes I will use commas, thank you.