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Visot Stone-White
« on: April 08, 2011, 02:06 »
Character Name: Visot Stone-White

Age: 10

Gender: Male

Description:

Visot is 4'5. He has blonde hair, that is very shiny. He weighs about 110 LBS, which is above the average ten year olds weight. His blue eyes look just like the ocean, and he has had many people talking about it. He is very bulked, and some people actually fear him from this. He doesn't look like he weighs 110 LBS, but he does.

Personality:

He is very confident about the way he battles, and he is very nice. He can be mean at sometimes, but this is very rare. He is very curious about the world and by Pokemon. This is one of the reasons that he set out to be a Pokemon trainer, along with the ambition to become the best Pokemon trainer in the entire Pokemon world. He is also on this adventure to discover what he wants to do with his life when or if he is the champion. He is also sarcastic when he is annoyed at something or someone.

History:

Visot is from the town known as " Accumula Town. " Located in the middle of Route One and Route Two in the Unova region. He had a very good childhood, with a family that loved him. However, this was just for the start of his life. By the time he reached five, his mother left him, leaving his father to take care of him. He had five brothers and sisters, all of them being atleast twenty years older than him, and all have finished the Unova region. Two of them, Rachel and Zeing, being in the Kanto region finishing it up there, having one badge at that time. When he was eight, one of the most terrible things in the world went down in Accumula Town. The Mayor of that town took their house away. This was mainly because they couldn't pay their rent on the house. They were forced to pack up their bags, and move out. They were sent to the Sinnoh region, and they are currently living in the center of Twinleaf Town. There he met two friends, that were ten. The next day, they left to be on their adventure in the Sinnoh region. He learned that good friends come and go, but to never give up. A miracle went on while he was in Twinleaf town. His family was allowed to live in Nuvema Town in the Unova Region. His family didn't think twice about this, and they went straight to the Unova Region. Once they got there, Visot had turned the age of Ten, and he was finally allowed to go out on his Pokemon adventure. He was sent to talk with Professor Juniper. She was very kind, and let him choose one Pokemon. Visot already knew what Pokemon he wants, so he chose Tepig. He loved that Pokemon, and he has already grew a bond with it. Upon getting his Pokemon, he also got a Pokedex, Xtransceiver, and Five Pokeballs. His father gave him a sleeping bag, and he said goodbye to all of his friends and family. He walked away, waving goodbye to his friends. He set out on his journy on Route One. He knew that this would be the adventure of his lifetime.

Friends and enemies

Friends:

Mikey
John

Pokemon



Ability: Blaze
Level: 7

Moves:
Tackle
Ember
Tail Whip


Pansage
Ability: Gluttony
Moves: Scratch, Lick, Leer, Leech Seed, Vine Whip, Fury Swips.

It shares the leaf on its head with weary-looking Pokémon. These leaves are known to relieve stress.
Key Items:
Xtranciever
Pokedex
Four Pokeballs
Trainer Card
« Last Edit: April 25, 2011, 14:06 by Pokeio »

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Re: Visot Stone-White
« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2011, 14:57 »
Fixed it up to meet standards.

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Re: Visot Stone-White
« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2011, 15:02 »
It's good. The guide itself is a bit ragged (but you just need to clear up some spilled tags and press the enter button a couple times, haha.)

As I have already said, the content is good. Crisp, with a clear story. All I ask is that you keep paragraphs and tenses in mind when you write.

You have my approval, just wait for PTX to come along and give his verdict.

Cheers. =]

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Re: Visot Stone-White
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2011, 15:06 »
Thank you so much! This really means alot to me, and I am not really use to the coding here yet. :(

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Re: Visot Stone-White
« Reply #4 on: April 10, 2011, 15:30 »
No problem. It does take a bit of time to get used to it. =]

Hope you have fun on the rest of the site too, by the way.

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Re: Visot Stone-White
« Reply #5 on: April 10, 2011, 19:59 »
You are Approved

All you need to do now is request acceptance into the member group. In order to do so, simply follow these steps...

* Go to your profile page

* Look in the "Modify Profile" drop down tab and select "Group Membership"

* Look for the member group called "PLC access" and select "Request Membership."

* After you have been approved, if you find yourself unable to post anywhere other than the PLC, go back to the "Group Membership" page and make sure that you make "Registered Members" your primary group.

Once you've done that I'll approve you for PLC access.
« Last Edit: April 10, 2011, 22:05 by Pokemon Trainer X »
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Re: Visot Stone-White
« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2011, 22:46 »
Updated:

Caught a Pansage.

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Re: Visot Stone-White
« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2011, 14:06 »
Updated with friends.