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Messages - Joeno
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556
« on: February 05, 2007, 18:45 »
You already have access; this is approved as well.
557
« on: January 31, 2007, 20:28 »
From this moment on, those "I have reached YYY posts!" topics are limited to topics about multiples of 1000 only. Others are just silly and unnecessarily spam up the forums. Furthermore, reaching a certain amount of posts should not be a goal, and we don't see the point in congratulating people for it or really celebrating it.
If silliness likes this continues, we may just stop these posts completely. For now, they're restricted.
558
« on: January 21, 2007, 21:09 »
Weren't you the guy from that time when, you know...? That was so cool. Very cool. Especially when... you know... then. Oooh yeah.
No, no idea. Didn't I see your nick that one time? 7/10
559
« on: January 21, 2007, 19:42 »
One typing error - 'my' instead of 'by' in the description.
Other than that, it looks good. You have been approved and can now access the appropriate forums. Have fun!
560
« on: January 21, 2007, 16:58 »
The amount of description is good. However, there's some thing you'll want to look at. For example:
* The Pokemon is called 'Flaaffy'. Use a tool like our Pkmndex to check those.
* 'were' is the past tense of 'are', 'where' is what you'd want to use.
* 'and..and..and': You may want to split a few of those sentences.
* 'Because' links two sentences together. You'd want a comma instead of a period there. The same goes with 'so'.
* You go through something and you threw a rock.
* There are two cars. You want to drive them. Bob was there, too.
* His parents were told that he could set off...? While they were the ones to stop him. Don't you mean that his parents tol dhim he could go?
* You seem to have inserted random new lines ('enter's) without any real reason. There's no need for them and make it more difficult to read your texts.
561
« on: January 21, 2007, 16:47 »
It is so incredibly difficult to only capitalize the first words of a sentence, proper nouns and the like? Why is a random 'is' capitalized in your text, while 'New Bark Town' isn't?
562
« on: January 10, 2007, 19:00 »
I see a lot of potential here. You've been approved. Have fun posting!
563
« on: January 10, 2007, 18:59 »
It looks good. You've been approved. Have fun posting!
564
« on: January 10, 2007, 18:55 »
That hasn't resolved the other issues.
565
« on: January 10, 2007, 18:55 »
Sentences tend to have a subject.
Also, DP Pokemon are not allowed, only 1st, 2nd and 3rd generation Pokemon are.
566
« on: January 10, 2007, 18:53 »
You've been approved and can access the relevant forums. Have fun posting!
567
« on: January 02, 2007, 19:53 »
I'm going to be more picky about this because we've had to have a number of corrections before, so I'd like it to be better than normal.
The description could actually be a sentence, it makes it both easier and more interesting to read. 'wandering', 'Abra', 'Growlithe', 'Centre, after this' 'Psyche, it later' 'training and he' (one huge run-on sentence). The capitalization and punctuation in your 'Pokemon' section is inconsistent.
568
« on: December 31, 2006, 22:09 »
Two minor things - please change the subject of the topic to your character name, and an indication of your Pokemon's move would be welcome.
However, in general this all looks good, so you're approved and should now have access to the relevant forums. Have fun posting!
569
« on: December 31, 2006, 22:07 »
Your capitalization does not fit common English rules, you still haven't run a spell check, the subject of your post still doesn't contain your character name and it's common to include the moves of your Pokemon. Also, you may want to mention who 'Chi' is - presumably your Chikorita, but you have not yet made this as explicit as it could be.
570
« on: December 31, 2006, 22:05 »
Please run a spell check and check your capitalization. Also, please expand your history section - why are you travelling, where did you get your Pokemon and so on - and perhaps try to add some more things to your description.
Also, it would help if you could add moves to your Pokemon and change the subject of the topic to the name of your character for easy searching.
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