Luc Ninjaso (Edited!!)

[Ninja]

Name: Luc Ninjaso

Gender/age:Male and 11

Description: 4.9 feet high.has a small scar, covered by his top.Messy blonde hair and a red and white top. He also wears Camo trousers. One of his front teeth is missing. He has light blue eyes.


History: Luc was born in Celadon City and raised there too. He reads pretty well and is quick witted.  He knocked a front tooth out when someone crashed into him when skiing, causing his left inscizor to be knocked out. He dosen't like thing like when he gets cold because he has develoeped a small swallowing habit. About a week after his Pokemon career started, his Pokegear's signal got lost and he ended up at the Celdon side of the Rock tunnel. There, he slipped on a ledge and landed on his arm, breaking it. He was taken to hospital and got his Pokegear upgraded. He has not got lost since. He hates death, as his pet Carvarhna died of a tumour in his mouth. Ever since then, he has not witnessed a death.
Pokemon:

Combusken   Male
OT:Luc
Moves: Blaze Kick, Sky Uppercut, Ember, Flamethrower,Double Kick Mega Kick and Slash.
Combusken was Luc's starter pokemon. He helped catch Ninjask and was the subject of a rattata attack when he was a Torchic. he Likes Luc so much, He takes some risks for him. He is also Luc's strongest Pokemon

Ninjask  Male
OT:Luc
Moves: Quick attack, Shockwave, Swords Dance,Screech,Agility , Double team and Fury cutter.
Ninjask is the fastest Pokemon Luc knows. He was once badly injured by a confused Combusken but now is good friends with him again. He is a bit of a trickster and used to push Luc in lakes with the aid of Combusken.


Clefairy
Male
OT: Kristian
Moves:DOubleslap, Pound, Metronome,Encore,Growl,Follow me
Luc traded this Pokemon for Ledyba with Kristian using the GTS. Has never been used by Luc before.

Kecleon Male
OT:Luc
One of Lucs more recent pokemon with his newly recieved greeat ball. Luc stumbled upon him near Saffron. He gaught him with the aid of Ledyba.

Buneary
Male
Ot:Luc
a new additon to his team from the trick house.

Prevois owned Pokemon:
LedybaMale
OT :Luc

Friends and enemies:

Friends: Lyoko

Enemies:None

Key Items:

PokeGear.
Chestnut.
Charcoal fossil.

Items:
Great balls x1
Pokeballsx5
Potions x2
A first aid kit

[Joeno]

Your description section appears to be missing subjects. Looks like this. Doesn't read that well.

Your history is incoherent. How did he get to Rock Tunnel? Has he travelled more? Why do you have nothing to say about that? Where was he born? What family does he have?

[Ninja]

Edited it. Please check it.

[Ninja]

I added the friends and enemies bit.

[Ninja]

Added a bit more. and Key items

[Ninja]

Please check it. I've aded more.

[Ninja]

Added Key Items and Items. Added more decription.

[Ninja]

Your description section appears to be missing subjects. Looks like this. Doesn't read that well.

Your history is incoherent. How did he get to Rock Tunnel? Has he travelled more? Why do you have nothing to say about that? Where was he born? What family does he have?

Is that better?

[Ninja]

Name: Luc Ninjaso

Gender/age:Male and 11

Description: 4.9 feet high.has a small scar, covered by his top.


History: Luc was born in Celadon City and raised there too. He reads pretty well and is quick witted.  He knocked a front tooth out when someone crashed into him when skiing, causing his left inscizor to be knocked out. He dosen't like thing like when he gets cold because he has develoeped a small swallowing habit. About a week after his Pokemon career started, his Pokegear's signal got lost and he ended up at the Celdon side of the Rock tunnel. There, he slipped on a ledge and landed on his arm, breaking it. He was taken to hospital and got his Pokegear upgraded. He has not got lost since. He hates death, as his pet Carvarhna died of a tumour in his mouth. Ever since then, he has not witnessed a death.
Pokemon:

Combusken
moves: Blaze Kick, Sky Uppercut, Ember, Flamethrower,Double Kick Mega Kick and Slash.
Combusken was Luc's starter pokemon. He helped catch Ninjask and was the subject of a rattata attack when he was a Torchic. he Likes Luc so much, He takes some risks for him. He is also Luc's strongest Pokemon
Ninjask
Moves: Quick attack, Shockwave, Swords Dance,Screech,Agility , Double team and Fury cutter.
Ninjask is the fastest Pokemon Luc knows. He was once badly injured by a confused Combusken but now is good friends with him again. He is a bit of a trickster and used to push Luc in lakes with the aid of Combusken.
Friends: None yet

Key Items:

PokeGear.

Items:

Pokeballsx5
Potions x2
A first aid kit.

[Typhlosion]

Approved.

Please may I recommend you read the forum rules beforehand though - we're not keen on double posting.

[Ninja]

Ok. How come all the other topic have double posts on them? 

((Just a small question))

[Typhlosion]

Actually, I stand corrected - double posting is allowed in this board only. Sorry for that.

Shows how long it's been since I did anything PLC related eh?

[Ninja]

****Update****

Caught a Ledyba.

[Ninja]

Kecleon caught. Found Fossil in Charcoal.

[Ninja]

Traded kristians Clefairy for Ledyba.