daisy/peach's chareter guide

[SBM]

Character Name: Ruby (nickname) full name Rubia Moreto Gemstonia

16 years old
Female

Description

Height: 5`6
Hair: dark brown 40cm long
Eyes: sky blue

Personality
Ruby is a Pokemon breeder and mainly breeds shiny Pokemon with her shiny Ditto. The only other shiny she owns is a shiny female black Charizard. She would trust her friends with her life and is very strong willed and wants to persevere at everything she starts. She has beaten the Sinnoh Elite 4.
She knows a lot about legendary pokemon.

History:
Her birth parents are dead and she was raised by the day care lady and man which is why she has a large passion for breeding. She is an expert at computers and could hack the best defended of computer systems.

Friends & Relations:
Saesa govannen
Day care lady
Day care man

Pokemon:
Blaziken
Vespiquen
Politoad
Gardevoir
Metang
Lucario

Items
A portable pda which acts as a pokedex and a laptop.




       

[Joeno]

You misspelled the title. Your description is very brief and doesn't really give me a proper idea. Your personality describes stuff that isn't part of personality, but could be expanded on in your history. The day care people really should be named, and the history expanded with whos, whys, whens, wheres and hows.

[SBM]

okay i'm gonna redo it any way when i've seen some aproved ones to see how i should set it out
Posted on: June 27, 2007, 20:15i've altered it a fair bit