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Jack Siparti
« on: July 06, 2010, 10:01 »
Name:  Jack Siparti

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Description: Jack is about 5’10 a very slim and fairly tanned from constantly being out in the open. He usually wears a plain white t-shirt with a dark black jacket. He wears denim blue jeans and shoes that were once white but not are a scruffy gray. He has longish brown hair that is messed up. Jack is also fairly muscular and can run for a long time.   

Personality: Jack is very competitive, and is determined to be the best. But he also has a love for Pokémon and will go out of his way to make Pokémon happy. He also has an ability to easily get on with people. Jack also loves to travel and gets irritated if he spends too long in a large city.

History: Jack was found abandoned on the island of Cinnibar at a young age, he was took in by the family of one of the guides at the Safari Zone, Jack then grew up outside the Safari Zone spending most of his time with his Foster Father working in the Zone. Jack kept putting off his first Pokémon as he knew he’d have to leave his family which he’d grown very close too. After many years Jack finally decided to start his journey, with the help of his father he caught a Sentret. After a tearful goodbye Jack left his family and caught a boat to Olivine. Ready to start his journey

Friends: Santiago


Enemies:


Pokémon:

   - Doug

Moves: Scratch, Quick Attack, Foresight, Defence Curl
Doug was Jack’s first catch, Jack and Doug share a close bond and Doug spends its time out of its pokéball resting on Jack’s shoulder. Doug seems quite timid and stay near Jack at any time of danger.

Key Items:

Map   

Fishing Rod 

Pokéblock Case   
« Last Edit: July 09, 2010, 09:48 by Y2J »

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Re: Jack Siparti
« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2010, 15:14 »
It's good, but you're Pokemon needs a move list and if you're character has any key items you should add them as well (if not, don't worry about it). Also there are a few very minor typos, but that's all.
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Re: Jack Siparti
« Reply #2 on: July 06, 2010, 15:41 »
Added Santiago to my friend list
« Last Edit: July 08, 2010, 17:36 by Y2J »

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Re: Jack Siparti
« Reply #3 on: July 06, 2010, 19:23 »
Yes. Welcome to the PLC family. You have been Approved

All you need to do now is request acceptance into the member group. In order to do so, simply follow these steps...

* Go to your profile page

* Look in the "Modify Profile" drop down tab and select "Group Membership"

* Look for the member group called "PLC access" and select "Request Membership."

* After you have been approved, if you find yourself unable to post anywhere other than the PLC, go back to the "Group Membership" page and make sure that you make "Registered Members" your primary group.

Once you've done that I'll approve you for PLC access.
« Last Edit: July 06, 2010, 21:32 by Pokemon Trainer X »
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Re: Jack Siparti
« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2010, 15:29 »
You know the bit where it says reason for joining, what was I supposed to put there?

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Re: Jack Siparti
« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2010, 15:41 »
Nothing special. It's not really important.
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