Lily Perinocles

[Roxxy the Zangoose]

Name: Lily Perinocles

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Family: Two rich parents, one snobbish older brother (Nathanial), one younger brother (James).

Description: Lily is about average height for her age at 5'1". She makes herself seem smaller, though, by scrunching herself up and speaking very softly. She has beautiful black hair about to her shoulders that she keeps in front of her face at all times. The last time she let someone see her dark blue eyes, he broke her heart...
Lily's constant outfit is a cream dress that has a purple bow around the waist. She has arm-length, white gloves that she wears for fancy occasions. Her shoes are white flats, and she does not like to wear tights. When she must, though, she has a nice pair of black knee-high socks she wears. Her bag is mostly purple, but the flaps and seams are done in dark red.

Personality: Lily is a quiet spoken girl. She hardly says anything, and seems to exist purely to make her parents look good. She shuns friends, so at school she's considered and outcast. She doesn't care, though. The less attention she gets the better.
However, when she does contests, Lily has a sort of quiet dignity. Her Pokemon are so in tune with her and her actions, she hardly has to move. If she doesn't give any instructions, her Pokemon could just pick a strategy and go with it. She trains them whenever she can get a chance. Lily has yet to win a ribbon, but she's not giving up hope.

History: Lily is the middle child and only daughter of Frieda and Robert Perinocles, two Pokemon Masters. Frieda is Ghost-type coordinator and Robert is a Fighting-type trainer. Both of them shun Normal type Pokemon, and have given Lily many chances to do the same, including giving Lily a red and purple pokedex. She's never really accepted the serenity of Ghost-types or the power of Fighting-types.
When a small runty Zigzagoon crawled into her room at night, she did the natural thing: hid it in her closet, nursed it back to health, and named it Jessie. She announced her new Pokemon at dinner one night, causing Robert to smash a priceless champagne glass. She was cast out of her home to sleep in the Pokemon Center. It was there one night that she decided to be a Normal-type trainer, no matter her parents' wishes

Friends: None so far

Enemies: None so far

Unknown: Unknown people are...unknown

Pokemon:


Zigzagoon-Jessie-level 12
~Female
~Brave nature
~Pickup
Headbutt/Growl/Tail Whip/Tackle
Jessie crawled in Lily's room one night as a scrawny and hungry Zigzagoon. Fearing her parents, Lily hid Jessie and nursed her back to health. Trainer and Pokemon have an inseparable bond, as Jessie thinks of Lily as her mom. Jessie is still a bit frightened of other Pokemon, but is getting better.


Taillow-Flit-level 9
~Male
~Docile nature
~Guts
Flit was abandoned by his trainer at the Pokemon Center because of his wing, which is bent at a funny angle. It was so badly damaged, he can now only fly in short, low to the ground bursts. Despite this, he's a happy, cheery pokemon who is always willing to give it his all in battle.
Growl/Peck/Focus Energy/Quick Attack
Key Items:
Purple pokedex w/ red outline x1
Regular pokeballs x4
Great ball x1
Contest pass x1, obtained through...less than legal methods

[Liam]

Thanks for trying once more. The more the merrier, I guess.

The content is pretty good, but I do have a couple of problems with the guide. First of all, the layout is very congested and squashed. Also, you've forgotten to put 'Personality' in bold tags, making it harder to read. Furthermore, Pokémon is spelt with a capital and you've made one or two grammatical errors.

[Roxxy the Zangoose]

I've spaced out the profile and put "Personality" in bold. But why shouldn't "Pokemon" be capitalized? Also, can you point out the grammar errors?

[Liam]

Pokémon is a name, it should be spelt with a capital. Also, unless you're talking about one parent (which I didn't think you were) it's parents'.

[Roxxy the Zangoose]

Okay, thanks. Made the changes.

[Liam]

Approved.

You already have access. Let me just move this into the other board.

[Roxxy the Zangoose]

*bump*

Got at...



From a special event in Sinnoh. TBWO (To Be Written Out)

Also added Flit to her pokemon.