An idea for a Mystery Dungeon story

[Petzbreeder]

I've been chatting with The Name Master lately and I've decided I want to create a Mystery Dungeon story in video form. It starts with a girl who has been bullied at school, she doubts herself because of it.

She goes to sleep in her bedroom and finds herself in a place that is surrounded by a weird purple energy. A Pokemon that is not seen calls out to her, saying that another world is in terrible danger and only she can save it.

She is then turned into a Pikachu and is sent to the Mystery Dungeon world with no memory of who she is (just like in the games) where she wakes up.

She then finds herself in the middle of a forest. An Oshawott approaches her and she is able to understand what he is saying.

I'm thinking of making the girl call herself Sparky after she turns into a Pokemon and the Oshawott calls himself Mizuki, after the names I used during my Gates to Infinity playthrough. Oshawott has a tendency to say "What? What?" a lot!

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[Petzbreeder]

After discovering that she can talk to other Pokemon and understand them, Sparky tells Mizuki that she has fragmented memories of a conversation with someone she couldn't see in a strange place (the one with the purple energy that I mentioned earlier) and she has conversations from time to time with the same mysterious being in dream sequences throughout the story.

Much like Mystery Dungeon Red and Blue, I'm thinking of making the mysterious being that Sparky talks to eventually reveal herself to be a Gardevoir.

The main antagonists of the story will be an Alakazam (Gardevoir's lover) and a Gothitelle. The Alakazam is being brainwashed to believe that he is in love with Gothitelle instead.

Eventually, it will be revealed that Alakazam and Gardevoir are like Guardians of the Mystery Dungeon world. Also, because Alakazam was brainwashed, the world is slowly being corrupted and Gardevoir can't protect it while she is suffering from a broken heart.

[Petzbreeder]

Sparky and Mizuki have to battle Alakazam and Gothitelle multiple times in the story, eventually saving Alakazam from Gothitelle's brainwashing.

At the end of the story, after being saved from the brainwashing, Alakazam returns to Gardevoir again. Sparky goes back home and returns to human form after gaining confidence in herself.

What do you think?

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[The name master]

Absolutely fantastically amazing! (Had to say all that to avoid break the three word minimum rule!)

[Petzbreeder]

I have to thank you so much for helping me with my confidence recently. I probably wouldn't have been able to make this if it wasn't for you!

[The name master]

I have to thank you so much for helping me with my confidence recently. I probably wouldn't have been able to make this if it wasn't for you!

There are some things I can't do because of confidence. An example is watching my animations with other people. It's embarrassing! 

Mizuki

How the hell do you say that???

[Petzbreeder]

Mizuki is pronounced like:

Mi = Me, as in myself
Zu = Zoo
Ki = Key, like in monkey

Mizuki is based on the japanese words Mizu, which means Water, and Suki, another japanese word which means Like, as in "Do you like it?".

So the name is effectively a corruption of "Like water".

[The name master]

What's the name of your story?

[Petzbreeder]

I haven't decided on a name yet.