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Good start. The writing style is a bit stiff, and written very factually. "This happened. I am here", sort of thing, you know? Maybe work on that a bit. Still, looking forward to seeing how this ends up.
He's posting what happens in a story format, but what I'm saying is that the writing style isn't as exciting as it could be. Just a small tip to make it more interesting for the reader, no offense meant of course.Please use the Private Message feature when asking about something that isn't related to the thread, as it's not nice to derail the conversation about the topic at hand. As a courtesy, however, here is the site I used: http://www.spriters-resource.com/The Mega Blaziken was made by me, as was Serperior, and the Trainer sprite. Anyway, yeah, looking forward to seeing what happens with your Nuzlocke, Blaze.
He's posting what happens in a story format, but what I'm saying is that the writing style isn't as exciting as it could be. Just a small tip to make it more interesting for the reader, no offense meant of course.
^That's why i'm going to do a little thing called evolution. Plus I just caught something that will help in gym one.....Hmmm.....? Who could N be? Anyone know? Answer's in the beginning.