You're close, but I'd like you to take care of a few things first:
* Be consistent in the spaces after your punctuation marks. There should always be a space after a comma, period and colon.
* There's a sudden newline in the middle of a sentence in your history.
* "Laura's".
* There's a few odd sentences in your history sentence. Please reread it and make a few updates. This might also be a good time to expand on it a bit - for example, where did Laura get that Squirtle? Why did she want to be a Pokemon trainer? Things like that
* It is preferred if you'd add a moveset for the Squirtle.