The 'try and keep up with ridiculous counting rules' game

[SirBlaziken]

21.

Yeah, once you break the shyness, Keira is one sided. Ryu has more personality than someone who's Bipolar.

[Wolstenholme]

22. I like Keira as a one dimensional character though. She's cuter that way.

[SirBlaziken]

23.

She does have a bit of a dark and serious undertone, due to knowing Ryu for so long.

But what I really want to know is not the characters, but the actual writing itself

[Wolstenholme]

24. I like your writing and your writing style, my only pointer is to stop putting thoughts in // and start writing them as prose so that your posts flow better.

[SirBlaziken]

25.

I haven't learned prose yet, so I'm doing that until I learn it later this year.

I've also got a new rp in the works after the ones I'm in now start to die off, which will hopefully not happen for a while.

[Wolstenholme]

26. By prose I simply mean put them in your continuous writing like "Ryu thought it odd" etc.

[SirBlaziken]

27.

Alright, i'll start that soon. And I do the // out of habit and so people can tell them apart from thoughts. Then again, that's what italics are for.

[Delicious_Scout]

27.

Alright, i'll start that soon. And I do the // out of habit and so people can tell them apart from thoughts. Then again, that's what italics are for.

28.

The Italian Pizza is agressive!

[SirBlaziken]

29.

*Facepalms* "What chaos have I brought into the world?" I thought to myself

[the bread dragon]

30 haha i also use italics its a small worldi think to myself

[Wolstenholme]

31 what have I started? she thought.

[Delicious_Scout]

32.

"No", Delicious_Scout said. "She did not think at all".

[Wolstenholme]

33. "How rude!" Chloe replied.

[Delicious_Scout]

34.

Delicious did not think about what she thought, so he thought that he could think about something later, like giving her a bowl of cornflakes.

[Wolstenholme]

35. Chloe could see complicated thoughts running through Scout's head. What is he thinking about? Cornflakes? She wondered.