Topic: Search for the lost box!

[The name master]

This is an animation I'm making.

Part 1

part 2

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Basically, a Mudkip and Skarmory are flying through the sky, when, suddenly they crash. They then spend the rest of their afternoon wandering through the middle of nowhere. They then find a cave with an emerald, ruby and sapphire. It turns out they're magical, as they join together and sucks them into the sky, where the get met by a mysterious figure, claiming to be the god that once protected the sky, but had his power sealed inside a box by an evil being. The creature pleads for their help, to get the box to break the hidden seal and free the creature. It says that once they've helped him, It'll send them back to their own world with a sack of money. Persuaded, they set off in search of this box through the mysterious land.

Mudkip wonders where they would find a box in a world they don't know. He points out it may take months of searching, and will be massively boring and difficult to animate. Suddenly, the lazy animator decided he didn't want to do all that, so he has a tornado take them. They end up in front of a museum named "Kecleon' s Museum" and below that a sign that says "main attraction: magic box" they walk to the door to enter, but get stopped by Kecleon himself, saying that they're closed. They decide to go round the back.

They open the back door, but find a Mightyena on guard. They distract it with a doughnut. Mudkip legs it to the box, but gets caught by Kecleon just as he was about to grab the box.


One hard to animate escape scene later, Mudkip notices a cafe, and asks skarmory if he wants to go. He does because he "loves coffee" a Spearow warns them that the person who runs the cafe is very vicious. They enter the cafe. They are greeted by a friendly Nidorina, who appears to have an interest in Mudkip. Skarmory says that she doesn't seem that bad. The Spearow says that that she just works there. He then points to a Latias behind the counter. He says she runs the cafe. Skarmory tries to flirt with her, but she is uninterested.

Latias wants them to be "served and out" she asks who's paying. Skarmory says mudkip is before he can say or do anything. Skarmory then finds a cheeky way to get mudkip to pay for two buns as well. Skarmory gets his bun (a cherry bakewell, a very large one!) and sniffs it. He thinks it's delicious. He asks the bun "how you doin'?"

After their tea and buns, they leave. Skarmory claims to have forgotten something, and rushs back inside. Latias then screams, skarmory then runs back out.

Back at the museum, kecleon is shouting at Mightyena. Mudkip uses a magnetic Yo-yo to pull the box towards him kecleon is too busy to notice. He tells Mightyena that "he is the worst guard in existence" (BOOYAH!) Kecleon notices mudkip. He stops him, then sings u can't touch this.

They go to the cafe. Nidorina greets skarmory with a sarcastic "how you doin'?" she flirts with mudkip, who is still uninterested.  This time mudkip says that skarmory is paying before he can say or do anything. Skarmory steps forward and regurgitates coins (yes I said regurgitate!) and to make things worse, he is coughing up 1p's. He eventually gives 10p. Nidorina says it costs 20p. Latias decides to give it for free. They drink their tea. 

Back at the museum, Mightyena is patrolling around the box. Mudkip interrupts and yells at the animator, because he thought by now they'd have some benny hill. So the animator does it for mudkip, but instead the Can can plays. The animation is sped up. Mudkip runs and leaps at the wall, but bounces off it. He then get blown up, chased away by Mightyena with a rifle, crushed by a thwomp. He then digs a tunnel into the museum, but gets blown up again with TNT.

Back at the cafe, Skarmory asks mudkip what the one thing people do at 12:00. Mudkip replies "have a piss?" skarmory corrects him by saying going to lunch. Mudkip gets what skarmory is saying. So they go. Latias comes in from the kitchen, and wonders where they went.

Skarmory thinks that it's too easy, and that there must be some sort of security, which there is. It's a bucket of water! Skarmory kicks the door open, making the bucket fall on the floor. Skarmory realises it's not water, it's fuel! It gets ignited, and explodes.

Back at the cafe, skarmory bangs on the table, making all the cups and plates on it jump up. He yells "I'M FINISHED!" and Latias yells from the kitchen "YOU WILL BE FINISHED IF YOU BREAK MY CHINA!" skarmory says that he's had enough, that the search for the lost box is out, done and finished. Nidorina tells mudkip what she thinks what he's trying to tell him is that he's finished.

Mudkip says that he can't finish now. Skarmory says that it nearly killed him twice. Mudkip thinks it's rubbish, he only has a few bruises. Skarmory replies "A FEW?! I bet if I were naked, I'd look like a black pudding!" Nidorina thinks that's a terrible thought. Mudkip says "I was going to have a sausage roll, but I don't think I'll bother now!"

Mudkip says that whether he's a black pudding or not, he's disappointed with him. He then says that if Latias isn't worth a few bruises. Skarmory says that it's not getting him any nearer to her. Mudkip says it is, and that's where it's leading him to. He says he was magnificent back at the museum. He tells skarmory to ask Nidorina. He asks her. She says "during the entry, you were magnificent. It was just the stealing that went a bit wrong." mudkip says that could have happened to anyone. Skarmory replies "but why does it always happen to me?!" mudkip tells him because he's the one who's going to impress Latias. Nidorina, who is not one for giving advice to black puddings, asks him if he's sure he wants to continue. Skarmory says no and stomps off. Latias flies past him, making him say "how you doin'?" skarmory is motivated again.

Outside, mudkip has a plan. He tells skarmory to distract kecleon and Mightyena, while he steals the box. Then they'll have an epic escape scene that'll take ages to animate. The animator is not doing that, so has a different idea.

Mudkip tells skarmory to get his thinking hat, which is a Chinese hat. Skarmory notices something in a bush. It's Mightyena and Nidorina! Together! Mightyena claims to be entirely innocent, that he just happen to be passing "this certain young lady, whoever she is." skarmory says that he believes him (he doesn't really!) mudkip doesn't. And he knows someone else who wouldn't. Mightyena says "you wouldn't tell?" skarmory says that you never know, that they're "very unpredictable, these Chinese."

Nidorina asks why mudkip is wearing a "lampshade" skarmory says that if she wants it, it's hers. Nidorina asks what she would be doing with a lampshade. Skarmory replies "get yourself a lamp, and it'll make a change from turning Mightyena on."


Mightyena tells him to be quiet, that he's giving the totally wrong impression. Skarmory tells Mightyena that there is one way out of the situation. Mightyena asks what that is. Skarmory says that he can give them the box, that way, they'd be out of their way, and they wouldn't get any thieves for a while. At first, Mightyena thinks it's a rip off deal, and calls skarmory a lovely person. Then he asks how long they have to have it. Mudkip replies "the more we have it, the more forgetful we become."

So Mightyena goes and gets the box. As he exits the museum, he's talking, as if to someone. Mudkip asks him who he's talking to. Mightyena says he's not talking to anyone, that he's just "rehearsing" for kecleon. He says that kecleon isn't someone you can lie to casually. You have to be word perfect. They both sarcastically wish him the best of luck.

Skarmory wonders if it'll work. Mudkip says that it's none of their business whether it works or not.

So anyway, mudkip and Skarmory are listening outside of the museum. Mightyena is saying his bit, then something smashes from inside. Kecleon yells "Don't lie to me! You've been with her! And don't but kecleon me!" another thing smashes, and mudkip and Skarmory run off.

Skarmory tells mudkip to go, and he'll hold them off. So mudkip goes.

At the sky pillar, the being says "wonderful work! Now, replenish my power!" mudkip opens the box, and a ruby, sapphire,, diamond and emerald come out. They play a nice tune. The contents of the box go inside the being.

Suddenly, the place starts to shake violently. It shakes more, making Mudkip panic. Once the shaking stops, the being's identity is revealed.

It's a Rayquaza. It does an evil laugh, then says "finally, I am myself again! Now I can rule this world, and your one as well! I need you no longer! I shall crush you like a bug!"
TO BE CONTINUED

[The name master]

I have to start another post because I've gone beyond the 1000 letter limit.

This section contains a description of the plot in detail

Spoiler: show

Meanwhile, skarmory is battling Mightyena. Holding out for a hero plays. Kecleon appears and asks where mudkip is. He says he going to release an evil being if he takes the box to the sky pillar. So skarmory flies to mudkip's rescue.

He rides in the trailer if a car. Rayquaza charges his hyper beam and fires at mudkip, but misses. Skarmory continues to fly. He says that nobody hurts mudkip. Rayquaza tries to hit mudkip with iron tail, but misses. Skarmory continues his flight. Rayquaza tries to crush mudkip under his body, but misses again, but now has him cornered.

Skarmory lands on a tree and sees Rayquaza and mudkip. He says "you goddamn creature! You will not hurt mudkip! I am really pissed off!" he flies off the tree and towards the sky pillar, doing a tarzan yell.

Skarmory rams into Rayquaza's face, head on. It sends rayquaza tumbling across the floor, screaming. The animation is then reversed, and you spin me right round plays.

Rayquaza charges up his hyper beam, and fires at skarmory, but skarmory reflects it back at rayquaza with a mirror. Skarmory has a mirror because he looks at his reflection, and says "how you doin'?" to it.




They then run to the top of the sky pillar, with shrek escape from the dragon playing. The escape... Just!

They find a window cleaning lift, mudkip gets in it. Skarmory points out that if they go In "that thing" rayquaza will just pull them up again. Mudkip says he can't, because the controls are in the lift itself, so he'll have no control over it, unless he has psychic powers, which mudkip thinks is highly unlikely.

Anyway, rayquaza does have psychic powers, as he uses them to unlock the door. He sees the lift going down. He says "oh! Oh, I don't think so!" using his psychic powers, he kills the power, making the lift fall at great speed. Mudkip presses the emergency stop button and the lift stops.

Rayquaza then goes over to the cables connected to the lift. He charges up his hyper beam, and blasts one of the cables. He goes over to the other one. Just as he  charges up his hyper beam to blast the other cable, he is hit by mist ball. It's Latias. She saves mudkip and Skarmory. Rayquaza attacks but misses. After being hit, Latias mega evolves. Latias seems to be winning, but Rayquaza mega evolves too and defeats Latias. They decide to throw mudkip at Rayquaza's face. Unfortunately, mudkip falls, but is caught by Nidorina. They go to the top again. Mudkip decides to whack Rayquaza in the face with a metal pole. It doesn't work, and only makes him more angry. As mudkip tries to think of something, rayquaza tries to kill mudkip with dragon pulse. Skarmory pushes him out of the way and gets hit instead. Dragon pulse is reflected back at Rayquaza, causing him to explode.

All the inhabitants of the sky world are returned to their former selves (kecleon is wario. Mightyena is knuckles. Nidorina is a Nidoqueen. Latias is a shiny.) kecleon/wario says "thank you very much! Long ago, the sky was a peaceful world, but that meddlesome being appeared and tried to take control! We managed to seal his powers inside the box. But he used the last of his power to change us. Thank you very much. Now then, let me send you back to your own world."

All by myself plays as skarmory is sad to have to leave Latias. He asks if they can stay. Mudkip says no. Skarmory says please. Mudkip still refuses as they don't belong on this world. Nidorina/Nidoqueen says please too, then starts singing. Mudkip decides to stay.

Just one question... Where are they going to live? Nidorina/Nidoqueen says they could build a house from the sky pillar.

Then the characters build Mudkip and Skarmory a home out of the materials from the sky pillar.  Their first attempt, a birdhouse, is rejected by Skarmory, who yells something that appears as a speech bubble with loads of symbols in it. They try again. They build a pagoda, which gets rejected by Mudkip, and responds by throwing his "thinking hat" (a Chinese hat) at Nidorina/Nidoqueen. they then build the perfect home. The other characters go inside. Only Mudkip and Nidorina/Nidoqueen are outside. They see Ho-oh fly across the sky. Mudkip evolves into a Marshtomp. They both go inside. THE END appears.

Please leave a comment

[SpicyJake]

This is a pretty great story to me. I like all of the details.

[The Hooded Trainer]

This looks pretty great. Keep up the good work.